INSTRUCTIONS: Revise the following paragraphs to eliminate sentence-structure errors. Hercules, an ancient Greek hero. Is featured in many different types of movies, dating back as early as 1910. Some stories are based directly on the ancient Greek myths of Hercules, others use variations in telling the Herculean stories. For example, one Disney film offers an animated version of Hercules, the directors alter the story to be acceptable to children. They present a lovable little baby. Who charms the audience as he grows to become a hero. In another high-tech version, Young Hercules is portrayed using sophisticated computer graphics the language and actions are presented in a modern setting. Which makes the film appeal to people today. Young people today who love young Hercules. In

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another interesting version, Hercules in New York, the film makers substitute New York City for the Greek background of Mount Olympus. Because this film presents a cocky, self-confident Hercules. It appeals to adults. As long as play writers have an imagination. They will continue to retell and alter the story audiences can enjoy the rich character of Hercules.

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     Hercules, an ancient Greek hero, is featured in many different types of movies, dating back as early as 1910. Some stories are based directly on the ancient Greek myths of Hercules. Others use variations in telling the Herculean stories. For example, one Disney film offers an animated version of Hercules; the directors alter the story to be acceptable to children. They present a lovable little baby who charms the audience as he grows to become a hero. In another high-tech version, Young Hercules is portrayed using sophisticated computer graphics. The language and actions are presented in a modern setting which makes the film appeal to young people today Young people today. who love young Hercules. In another interesting version, Hercules in New York, the film makers substitute New York City for the Greek background of Mount Olympus. Because this film presents a cocky, self-confident Hercules, it appeals to adults. As long as play writers have an imagination, they will continue to retell and alter the story so that audiences can enjoy the rich character of Hercules.