Nancy has finished the first draft of her paper, and gives it to a friend to review. Her friend tells her that she didn’t find one of her points very convincing, and felt it was too short and overly opinion-based. What should Nancy do to revise this section?

a. Include a humorous article on the topic
b. Include more relevant facts and statistics on the subject
c. Revise the wording to make her opinions more authoritative
d. Add a couple of sentences tying the point back to the thesis


b. Include more relevant facts and statistics on the subject

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Usate il partitivo di. (5 pts – 1 each) (Use the partitive di.)

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Scrivete la frase necessaria con il verbo avere. Non ripetete nessun’espressione. (Write a complete sentence using the appropriate avere expression. Do not repeat any of the expressions.)

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Say if you like or don’t like these activities. Name activities (to eat, to go to the movies, etc), not nouns (music, films, etc.).

1.
2.
3.
4.
5.

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The first step in finding an implied main idea is to

a. find the topic. b. identify any transitions. c. decide how you feel about the subject. d. determine what you already know about the topic.

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