INSTRUCTIONS: Edit the following paragraph for subject-verb agreement only. Find any incorrect verb forms in each sentence, and correct them to agree in number with the subject. Palm organizers makes personal record keeping more convenient. Most models are slightly larger than a cell phone. The best part, however, are the vast amount of information that can be stored and retrieved in seconds. Hundreds of addresses is stored in its memory, so the owners can find all the phone numbers, pagers, and fax numbers needed for any one person. They can also add attachments to any person's name, so, in seconds, the Palm will call up birthdays and other personal information. In addition, most people who own one of these handy devices uses it to keep their schedules straight and keep track of

Question

important obligations, like paying bills. Another convenience are that Palms work in conjunction with personal computers. Linking the Palm to the computer let the owner type data and send it directly into the Palm. Later, if a paper copy of any record are needed, the owner can get it from the computer. Owners of these handheld devices writes notes, do simple calculations, and set up to-do lists. The newest models even establishes wireless connections to the Internet, and people can send email without being at home or at the office. For people who are used to electronic gadgets, Palms makes it a little easier to organize their lives.

What will be an ideal response?

Answer 1

(Verbs that need to be changed are in boldface.)

     Palm Organizers make personal record keeping more convenient. Most models are slightly larger than a cell phone. The best part, however, is the vast amount of information that can be stored and retrieved in seconds. Hundreds of addresses are stored in its memory, so the owners can find all the phone numbers, pagers, and fax numbers needed for any one person. They can also add attachments to any person's name, so, in seconds, the Palm will call up birthdays and other personal information. In addition, most people who own one of these handy devices use it to keep their schedules straight and keep track of important obligations, like paying bills. Another convenience is that Palms work in conjunction with personal computers. Linking the Palm to the computer lets the owner type data and send it directly into the Palm. Later, if a paper copy of any record is needed, the owner can get it from the computer. Owners of these handheld devices write notes, do simple calculations, and set up to-do lists. The newest models even establish wireless connections to the Internet, and people can send email without being at home or at the office. For people who are used to electronic gadgets, Palms make it a little easier to organize their lives.