Revise the paragraph for coherence. One sentence is in the wrong place. Move it to the right place by drawing an arrow from the sentence to its proper place.

Peter Hsu anxiously awaited the first day of his new job. He was halfway to the office before he realized that he had taken the wrong freeway exit. He woke up early and rushed to the bathroom before his roommate beat him to it. He stayed in front of the mirror longer than usual, checking and rechecking his hair, face, and clothes. He wanted his appearance to be flawless. Peter ate breakfast without tasting it and dashed out of the apartment.


He was halfway to the office before he realized that he had taken the wrong freeway exit.
(This should be the last sentence in the paragraph.)

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her prose was skillfully rendered, and her plot intelligently crafted. Indicate whether the statement is true or false

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