Gary is reviewing Sara’s paper. He identifies that one of her paragraphs is too long and is not cohesive. What can Sara do to make that paragraph cohesive?
a. Combine the short sentences in the paragraph.
b. Examine sentences that use similar verbs to previous sentences.
c. Revise long sentences in the paragraph to be shorter..
d. Examine each supporting sentence in the paragraph to ensure it relates to the topic sentence..
d. Examine each supporting sentence in the paragraph to ensure it relates to the topic sentence..
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Indicate whether the statement is true or false
Read the following paragraphs and respond to the questions that follow by choosing the letter of the correct answer.
It started out as a typical sandbox fight between 4-year-olds. Two preschool girls battling over a red plastic strainer. Suddenly one of the little girls gave up. With her hands clenched at her side, she began to bawl. Her pint-size opponent looked to me, a lunchtime volunteer mom, for help. “All this over a sand toy?” her eyes said. “What’s really bothering you?” I asked, putting an arm around the sobbing bundle before me. “I want my daddy . . . I want to go to his house now . . . I want my mommy to come,” she said, tears and words pouring out in equal measure. I started to feel my own throat ache. I clutched her closer as I debated whether to let her see my own tears. What can we infer about the little girl from this paragraph? a. She is upset over the lunchtime conflict. b. She does not like the other child. c. She feels very close to the lunchtime volunteer. d. She is upset over her parents’ divorce.