William learned to sing well in choir. Soon it became his favorite activity.
What will be an ideal response?
Possible revision: William learned to sing well in choir. Soon singing became his favorite activity.
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La capitale d’Italia è ____________________.
Supply the correct facts about the geography of Italy.
Which sentence begins with a transition?
a. sentence (1) b. sentence (4) c. sentence (6) d. sentence (10)
La primera semana. Alejandra and her husband Julio have opened an electronics store. She tells about the first week of their new business. Complete her story by selecting the correct form of each verb.? Julio siempre quiere ( trabajar / trabaja / trabaje ), pero es mejor que ( descansar / descansamos / descansemos ) un día a la semana.?
A. ?trabaja / decansar B. ?trabajar / descansemos C. ?trabaje / descansamos D. ?trabaja / descansemos
What are you looking for and correcting when revising a paragraph?
a. Complex verb structures and phrases b. Independent issues of repeated descriptors c. Whole paragraph organization and development d. Grammatical and formatting issues