INSTRUCTIONS: Edit the following paragraphs for consistent point of view only. Using the first sentence as the basis for the point of view, change the rest of the paragraph to maintain a consistent point of view. Do not edit for any other kinds of changes. One vivid memory the woman has of the state fair is going with her father on the Ferris wheel. When she was six years old, she was always
scared because you was afraid of falling from the swinging chair. You did not look down very much. Instead, I looked at the bar that she and her father were holding on to. She saw how large and strong his hands were compared to your hands. To this day, in your mind, when you sees midway rides, you thinks of being six years old again, of being afraid as the wheel begins to turn, moving them up into the air. She thinks of your dad's hands on the Ferris wheel bar and how scarred they were from his work on car engines and how rough they were from cold weather because he had to work in an open shop. Somehow you felt safer by concentrating on your dad's hands rather than on the up-over-and-down motion of the Ferris wheel. She never sees a Ferris wheel today without having this childhood memory come alive.
What will be an ideal response?
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One vivid memory the woman has of the state fair is going with her father on the Ferris wheel. When she was six years old, she was always scared because she was afraid of falling from the swinging chair. She did not look down very much. Instead, she looked at the bar that she and her father were holding on to. She saw how large and strong his hands were compared to her hands. To this day, in her mind, when she sees midway rides, she thinks of being six years old again, of being afraid as the wheel begins to turn, moving them up into the air. She thinks of her dad's hands on the Ferris wheel bar and how scarred they were from his work on car engines and how rough they were from cold weather because he had to work in an open shop. Somehow she felt safer by concentrating on her dad's hands rather than on the up-over-and-down motion of the Ferris wheel. She never sees a Ferris wheel today without having this childhood memory come alive.
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C) Las personas en que la longitud del dedo anular y el dedo índice son iguales, son amantes de la paz, y se sienten incómodos cuando se ven en un conflicto. Son personas organizadas y tratan de llevarse bien con todo el mundoh. Son personas que tienden a ser fielesi en una relación llena de ternura j y cariñok hacia sus parejas.