INSTRUCTIONS: Carefully read the following thesis sentences. Revise each thesis sentence so that the points previewed are in parallel form. You may need to add, delete, or alter a word or words.The old house needed a new roof, new plumbing, and the appliances were shot.

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The old house needed a new roof, new plumbing, and new appliances were shot.

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He said the teachers were making fun of his jacket

Indicate whether the statement is true or false

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?In each blank, write D for dangling modifier, M for misplaced modifier, or OK for correct sentence. Irene rejected his proposal and dr?ove away from her suitor with screeching wheels.?

Fill in the blank(s) with the appropriate word(s).

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?PASO 2. Oraciones. What is a typical day like for Juan and his roommate? Complete the sentences in his description by selecting logical verbs from the list and writing them in the correct form of the present tense. Then add at least three more words in Spanish to complete each sentence. Use your imagination and words from the chapter to supply details.Don't repeat verbs. contestar escuchar estudiar llegar regresar tomar trabajar visitar Por la noche, yo estudio. Pero (But) Juan y sus amigos _________________________ ? ________________________________________________________________________?

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Emma's answers were _______when she was asked where she had spent the day

She didn't want to say exactly where she'd been. a. ambiguous b. imagery c. foremost d. inference

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