INSTRUCTIONS: Carefully read the following thesis sentences. Revise each thesis sentence so that the points previewed are in parallel form. You may need to add, delete, or alter a word or words. His summers are spent jet-skiing at the lake, surfing at the beach, and he even sails on the ocean

What will be an ideal response?


His summers are spent jet-skiing at the lake, surfing at the beach, and sailing on the ocean.

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el mes del poema "Oda a unas flores amarilla"

Fill in the blank(s) with the appropriate word(s).

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Which of the following is not a strategy for arranging the details? a. Make a quick list of key details arranged according to the pattern. b. Begin writing the essay and see if the details fall into place

c. Create an outline of key points and supporting details. d. Fill in a graphic organizer with supporting details.

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Chi __________ tua madre e tuo padre?

Fill in the blank(s) with the appropriate word(s).

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When connecting the process and the traits what is important in revising?

A) Evaluating the format of the essay. B) Connecting your thoughts and the information you are imparting. C) Showing trends and how something changes over time. D) Checking for grammar correctness.

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