INSTRUCTIONS: Revise the following paragraphs to eliminate sentence-structure errors. In today's society, more and more people finding that they can save money by shopping wisely. Shoppers are heading for outlet malls. Where they can purchase quality merchandise at a fraction of its price. Retail price. Some outlet clothing stores carry merchandise. That is exclusively for women. However, other clothing stores carry discounted clothing for all members of the family, some stores carry only baby clothing other shops specialize in toys. Shoppers can also find discount stores. That specialize in linens, crystal, books, or cookware. For additional savings, shoppers often finding end-of-season markdowns at these outlet stores. No matter what shoppers need. They can usually find a store

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that features these items at reduced prices they can save money.

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     In today's society, more and more people finding that they can save money by shopping wisely. Shoppers are heading for outlet malls where they can purchase quality merchandise at a fraction of its retail price. Some outlet clothing stores carry merchandise. that is exclusively for women. However, other clothing stores carry discounted clothing for all members of the family. Some stores carry only baby clothing, and other shops specialize in toys. Shoppers can also find discount stores that specialize in linens, crystal, books, or cookware. For additional savings, shoppers often finding end-of-season markdowns at these outlet stores. No matter what shoppers need, they can usually find a store that features these items at reduced prices, so they can save money.