Tamayo has written the following sentence: Every week my employees are asking for more
vacation time. What advice would you give him to revise this sentence?
a. Refer to the employees rather than my employees which might be considered offensive.
b. Add additional detail to make a complete thought.
c. Add additional detail to make the sentence more interesting.
d. Don't begin your sentence with the word every.
e. Don't use the progressive tense if the action happens on a regular basis.
e
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